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在英语考试中，得语篇者得天下！搞定写作和语篇，何愁美梦不成真！还没考试的同学们快来看看，说不定就押中你们的写作和语篇了！上名校的梦想一不小心就实现了呢！
先来看书面表达！中考书面表达无非四大类别：写人叙事类、观点看法类、做法建议类以及介绍类。
类别一、写人叙事类
第1篇（2017重庆A卷18分）
照片背后的故事
在过去的日子里，我们曾经欢笑，也曾经哭泣……照片，或将这些精彩定格，或勾起你对往事的回忆。某英语网站向你发出邀请。请你按要求用英语写一篇文章，分享你照片背后的故事。
要求：
故事必须原创；
80-120词，开头已给出，不计入总词数；
文中不能出现自己的姓名和所在学校的名称。
参考要点：
描述你的照片（时间，地点，人物……）；
分享你的故事（起因，经过，结果……）；
谈谈你的感受（感动，怀念，影响……）。
This is a photo that is very special to me. In the photo,
（推荐河南、甘肃、云南、陕西、广西使用）
【写作点拨】本文要求围绕“照片”叙述一个与之相关的故事，是一篇记叙文。根据参考要点可知，文章属于经典“三段式”的写作：1. 描述照片拍摄的时间、地点和人物等基本信息；2. 叙述与照片相关的故事，包括起因、经过和结果等；3. 谈论对事情的感受。写作过程中，要注意时态的变化：描述过去发生的事情主要用一般过去时，谈论对事情的感受主要用一般现在时。
【高分范文】
This is a photo that is very special to me. In the photo,I was 10 while my dad looked younger. Look, we are playing ping pong happily.
I used tobe a ping pong player. My dad trained me so hard, though he was tired after a day’s work. Once, I lost a game and I felt sosad thatI wanted to give up. My father said nothing, sitting quietly with me. The next morning, I found a piece of paper. It said, “Never give up, dear.I am proud of you!”
Now, I spendless time playingping pongbecause ofmy busy study. But I will never forget what my father told me. He is proud of me. How lucky I am to be his daughter!
第2篇（2017重庆B卷18分）
征文——我和朋友之间的故事
在我们成长的道路上，朋友是不可或缺的风景。在相知相伴的岁月里，留下了多少美好的故事和难忘的回忆！某英语报社以“A Story Between My Friend And Me”为题开展征文活动，请你按要求用英语写一篇文章参赛。
要求：
故事必须原创；
80-120词，开头已给出，不计入总词数；
文中不能出现自己的姓名和所在学校的名称。
参考要点：
分享故事（起因，经过，结果……）；
表达感受（幸福，感动，思考……）；
. ……
A Story Between My Friend And Me
There is always something unforgettable in my life, especially the story between my friend and me.
（推荐云南、辽宁使用）
【写作点拨】本文是一篇命题作文，并给出了参考要点。由题目“A Story Between My Friend and Me”可知写作的重点在于叙述故事，并表达感受。写作时，可选取个人与朋友之间印象深刻，且比较有教育意义的事件。叙述个人故事，要用第一人称，且时态主要为一般过去时，表达感受时，用一般现在时。
【高分范文】
There is always something unforgettable in my life, especially the story between my friend and me.One thing happened in the past had a deep influence on me.
Here is the story. On a rainy day, I suddenly fell downand hurt myself badly. My left leg was broken. So I had to stay in hospital for about one month and I was worried aboutmy study. Then my friend Mingming came to see me. When he knew about that, he said he could help me with my study. On hearing this, I didn’t feel worried any more. From that day on, he taught me every day. I was so moved. I didn’t fall behind the other students with Mingming’s help. I thanked him a lot.
In my opinion, friends are very important in our life. No matter what happens, true friends will always be friends.
类别二、观点看法类
第3篇（2017浙江舟山20分）
选书的理由
学校将举办“A Summer for Better English”活动，请你从下面的推荐书单中选择两本想阅读的书刊，然后用英语写一篇短文，在学校的English Corner分享。
A list of books for English skills and for fun
□ Basic English Writing □ Treasure Island
□ Secrets of English Words □ Robinson Crusoe
□ A Guide to English Listening □ Alice’s Adventures in Wonderland
□ 20 Topics for English Speaking □ Time for Kids（a magazine）
注意：
（1）必须从书单中选择2本书刊，并阐述理由。
（2）文中不得出现与你身份相关的信息。
（3）词数：80～100。短文首句仅供选择使用，不计入总词数。
短文首句：To improve our English, the school has given a list of books for us to read this summer.
（推荐辽宁使用）
【写作点拨】本文要求写一篇表达观点的短文。考生在写作时，一定要注意题目中要求选择两本想阅读的书刊，因此在陈述理由的时候，要分别针对选择的两本书刊说明理由。题目中给出的书刊列表“暗藏玄机”。左列书刊提高英语语言能力，右列书刊拓展英语文化。考生可针对两列书刊不同的功能从中选择两本，并简要陈述理由。
【高分范文】
To improve our English,the school has given a list of books for us to read this summer. Of all the suggested books,I have decided to choose Secrets of English Words and Time for Kids.
The first one is a book which may help learn English words better. By reading this book, I will surely know more new words. This will make my future study much easier. Time for Kids is a popular magazine specially written for students, in which I will read interesting stories and have a taste of teen life abroad. So it must be great fun readingit.
By being part of this activity, I am expecting a big step forward in my English.
第4篇（2017山东泰安20分）
共享单车之我见
如今，很多城市出现了一种绿色出行方式—共享单车（bike-sharing）。它因环保、便捷而备受青睐，但同时也引发了一系列问题。请你根据提示以“Bike-sharing”为题写一篇英语短文，表达自己的看法和建议。
要点提示：
Advantages
be convenient，less pollution，reduce the traffic pressure（减缓交通压力）
take exercise…
Problems
throw away, damage(损毁)，be stolen…
Advice
civilized(文明的)，follow the rules，take good care of…
注意：
短文应包括以上要点，可适当发挥，以使行文连贯；
文中不得出现真实的人名、校名及地名；
词数：80～100字（文章开头已给出，不计入总词数）。
Bike-sharing
Today, as a greener means of transportation, bike-sharing is becoming more and more popular in many cities.
（推荐河南、陕西和辽宁使用）
【热点解读】共享单车是一种自行车共享服务。自2017年，共享单车在各大城市如雨后春笋般茁壮成长，为人们的出行带来了极大的便捷，有效地缓解了交通拥堵，也为低碳环保出了一份力。同时，共享单车也出现了一系列的问题，如乱停乱放，被偷被毁，充值容易退费难等。针对这些问题，各地也推出了一系列的举措来规范共享单车的管理。
共享单车是2017年中考命题人的“宠儿”，以不同的形式频频出现在各地中考试卷中。考生在繁忙的复习备考中，要注重关注社会热点，思考社会问题，尤其是与生活息息相关的热点。
【写作点拨】本文要求以“Bike-sharing”为题，根据表格的内容提示，写一篇短文，表达自己对共享单车的看法和建议。写作时，考生要紧密贴合表格中的三个要点：首先，阐述共享单车的优点；其次，列举共享单车带来的问题；最后，根据问题给出个人建议。
【高分范文】
Today, as a greener means of transportation, bike-sharing is becoming more and more popular in many cities.It’s known thatit has many advantages. So it’s enjoyed by lots of people.
First of all, it’s very convenient for people togo somewhere. Also, it helps to reduce the traffic pressure. There will be less pollution because ofbike-sharing. Besides, bike-sharing helps people take more exercise. In this way, it’s helpfulto people’s health.
However, it also brings some problems. For example, some people throw them away after using bikes. Even some people damage them , and some bikes are stolen.
In my opinion, everyone should try to be civilized and follow the rules of using bikes. As long aswe take good care of bikes, it will make our life better and better, and our environment will be more beautiful.
类别三、做法建议类
第5篇（2017达州10分）
如何做一个好学生
某班英语课上，就“争当中华好少年”进行小组交流活动，请你根据活动记录情况，以“How to be a great student?”为题，写一篇英语短文。
良好习惯
生活规律，健康饮食，加强锻炼
学习刻苦，上课认真听讲，按时完成作业
诚实守信
不撒谎，考试不作弊
遵守校规
严禁私自下河洗澡，严禁手机进校园，不打架斗殴
……
……
要求：
全文字数90词左右，文章开头已给出，不计入单词总数。
条理清楚，书写工整，句式规范。标点符号和大小写使用正确。
内容必须包含表格中的提示信息，并适当发挥；文中不得出现真实的人名及地名。
How to be a great student?
It’s very important to be a good student. As teenagers, how to be a good student?In my opinion,
（推荐广西和辽宁使用）
【写作点拨】根据给出的题目“How to be a great student?”可以判断题目要求考生写一篇做法建议类的短文。表格中已经给出了具体的做法，考生在写作时需要围绕表格中给出的三个方面写作，并适当发挥。如：注重个人公众场合的行为举止、与同学互帮互助等。做法建议类文章在写作时，主要用一般现在时。
【高分范文】
It’s very important to be a good student. As teenagers, how to be a good student?
In my opinion，there are lots of things we should do. Firstly, it’s necessary todevelop good habits in life and study. For example, we should eat healthily and do much exercise every day. Besides, we should listen tothe teacher carefully and finish homework on time. Secondly, be honest. Don’t tell lies and never cheat in tests. Honesty is the best policy. Thirdly, we are supposed toobey the school rules. Don’t go swimming alone without permission, and don’t take mobile phones to school and so on. Finally, we should get on well withour classmates. When someone is in trouble, we should give them a hand.
第6篇 （2017宜宾15分）
如何提高学习效率
目前很多学生整天都忙于学习，成绩却不理想。请根据表格内容，结合自身实际，写一篇关于“怎样提高学习效率”的短文。
要求：
短文应条理清楚，行文连贯，段落分明，90词左右。（开头结尾已给出，不计入 总字数）
短文中不能出现真实的人名、校名及地名等信息。
短文应包括全部信息，可围绕主题适当发挥。
学习方法
1. listen to the teacher
2. take notes
3. review in time
4. correct mistakes
…
体育锻炼
1. exercise
…
其他方面
1. make good use of time
2. ask sb. for help
…
How to improve our study effectively
A great number of students can’t finish their tasks, which leads to bad results and makes them less interested in their study. How can we solve the problem? Here are some suggestions.
___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
If you follow the advice that I have mentioned above, you will be successful.
（推荐广西、陕西和辽宁使用）
【写作点拨】根据题目要求可以看出本文是一篇做法建议类的说明文。考生需要结合表格中给出的中英文提示，围绕“如何提高学习效率”写出具体的做法或建议。写作时，要注意使用连接词将各个要点衔接起来，使文章的表达更流畅自然。除了表格中给出的要点，考生还要适当发挥。
【高分范文】
How to improve our study effectively
A great number of students can’t finish their tasks, which leads to bad results and makes them less interested in their study. How can we solve the problem? Here are some suggestions.
You need to find an effective learning method. Take advantage ofclass time to listen to the teacher. Taking notes will help you remember what the teachers say. After class, you should review your lessons in time. You should also finish your homework carefully. If you have discovered any mistakes, correct them immediately. This will help you form a good learning habit.
Besides, you need to do some exercise. It can not onlymake you relaxed but alsobuild up your body.
All in all, you should make good use oftime in studying and relaxation. If you have any problems in your study, you can askyour classmates or teachers for help.
If you follow the advice that I have mentioned above, you will be successful.
类别四、介绍类
第7篇（2017金华20分）
分享名著——《老人与海》
假如你应邀参加一个国际读书会，并将分享自己读过的一本好书。请根据下列表格中的要点，用英语写一篇短文，介绍你要分享的书。
Key points（要点）
Words and expressions for reference（参考词汇）
What the name is
The Old Man and the Sea
…
Who write it
Ernest Hemingway，America
…
What it is about
fisherman，
fight against fish and nature
…
Why I like it
meaningful，never give up，
well-known sentence: “Man is not
made for defeat（击败）.”, …
interesting, helpful…
well-known sentence：…
注意：
（1）可选择使用所给的书名及内容，也可另选书籍；
（2）短文内容可适当增加；
（3）文中不得出现真实的人名和校名；
（4）词数：80~100；
（5）短文首句仅供选择使用，不计入总词数。
短文首句：The book I’d like to share with you is The Old Man and the Sea.
（推荐辽宁使用）
【写作点拨】根据题目要求可知本文是一篇说明文，考生需要用英语介绍《老人与海》这本国外名著。写作要点在表格中已经给出。写作时，首先要介绍这本书的基本信息，如作者的名字和国籍；其次，介绍这本书的大概内容；最后，介绍为什么喜欢这本书。文章的段落依然呈现“三段式”的结构，层次分明。
【高分范文】
The book I’d like to share withyou is The Old Man and the Sea, written by an American writer Ernest Hemingway. This book tells about a fisherman who is lucky enough tocatch a huge fish at sea,but finds it hard to take it home.On the way back,he has to fight againstthe fish,and the sea as well.
What I like most about the book is that the fisherman never gives upwhen meeting withdifficulties. I still remember the well-known sentence from the book: Man is not made for defeat. This tells us that nothing seems terrible as long as we have a strong will and a brave heart.(100 words)
第8篇（2017安徽25分）
邀请——参加展演活动
假如你是李华，你们学校将举行“弘扬中华传统文化—戏曲进校园”展演活动，你打算邀请你的美国朋友Mike参加。请你根据以下提示用英文给他写一封电子邮件。
时间：7月1日下午2点；
地点：学校操场；
内容：文化展览、节目表演等。
提示词：戏曲opera n.表演 performance n.
注意：
词数80~100；
可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
信中不能出现与本人相关的信息。
开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数。
Dear Mike,
I know you are interested in Chinese traditional culture.
Yours,
Li Hua
（推荐广西和甘肃使用）
【写作点拨】本文要求考生写一封邀请信，邀请美国朋友Mike来参加展演活动。信的开头和结尾已经给出，考生在写作时重点关注如何写好内容。根据给出的要点，短文中要包含活动的时间、地点和活动内容。写作时，考生需要运用适当的连接词将各个要点紧密地连接起来，并根据想象对活动内容做简要的说明和评价。
【高分范文】
Dear Mike,
I know you are interested in Chinese traditional culture.
Now, I have a piece of good news to share withyou. There is an activity about Chinese traditional operas at 2:00 p.m. on July 1. It will be held onthe playground in our school and all the teachers and students will attend. On that day, a culture show and many wonderful opera performance will be put on. It’s a chance foryou tolearn more about Chinese traditional culture. Come and join us! I think we’ll have a great time.
I’m looking forward toyour reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
热点话题不仅在书面表达中频频“露脸”，在语篇中更是“流连忘返”！不信，快来看！
第1篇（2017安徽15分）
共享单车有利于城市的健康发展
Bike-sharing is a new choice for short journeys in cities. It is good to the1 development of the big cities.
A2 by a company found that shared bikes started the nation’s3 for bikes again. Now more and more Chinese people are4 bikes instead of cars to make short journeys in cities.
An engineer of that company says that since the5 of shared bikes, people have made fewer trips by car. The love for shared bikes is not only among6 people, who were born in the 1980s and 1990s, but also among people over sixty.
At weekends, the number of the riders in Shenzhen reaches the7 of all cities. On weekdays, the number of people who use shared bikes to travel to work is8 in Shanghai.
It is said that bike-sharing will help9 the cities’ environment. It not only helps solve the traffic problems, but also will help to make more use of10 in cities. Take Beijing as an example, if more people choose shared bikes, an area of five Bird’s Nest stadiums(体育场) will be saved.
1.A. slow B. healthy C. harmful D. sudden
2. A. rule B. plan C. report D. suggestion
3. A. search B. worry C. preparation D. love
4. A. choosing B. pushing C. repairing D. locking
5. A. end B. start C. control D. fall
6. A. strong B. weak C. old D. young
7. A. top B. side C. corner D. line
8. A. coming over B. putting off C. going up D. giving away
9. A. discover B. separate C. experience D. improve
10. A. air B. time C. space D. money
【主旨大意】本文介绍了一种新的出行方式—共享单车，它重新唤起了国人对自行车的热爱，有效的减少了汽车的使用，给人们和环境带来了很多好处。
【答案】1~5：BCDAB 6~10：DACDC
第2篇（2017邵阳10分）
一带一路
Maciek Czastka was born in Lodz, Poland. He came to China several years ago. So far, he has been working in Chengdu for three years.
“The Belt and Road Initiative(一带一路的倡议)is meaningful,” he said. “Thanks to it, we are offered more chances.” The most powerful support for Chengdu to thrive(兴盛) along the Belt and Road is the Chengdu-Europe express railway(高速铁路). It provides direct train services between Chengdu and the city of Lodz. Because of the express railway, trains can bring things from China to Europe. At the same time, they can bring back European food, wine, meat and so on. In 2016, a total of 460 trains ran between Chengdu and Europe. The number is expected to grow to 1,000 this year.
Since the Chengdu-Lodz express railway was opened, Chengdu, together with other cities in west China, has developed close trade ties with the European country. Poland is one of the largest apple producers in Europe. Czastka’s company helps farmers in Poland sell their apples to China. More and more European products will be sent to China in the future.
The Belt and Road Initiative is meaning ful
◆Born:1
About Maciek Czastka
◆Workplace: In Chengdu
◆Working in Chengdu: Since2 ago
The most powerful support for Chengdu
It’s the Chengdu-Europe express railway. In 2016, a total of3 trains ran between Chengdu and Europe. This year it will grow to 1,000.
The advantages of “the Chengdu-Europe express railway”
1.The Chengdu-Europe express railway provides4 between Chengdu and the city of Lodz.
2. Chengdu, together with other cities in west China, has developed5 with the European country.
【主旨大意】本文通过来自波兰的Maciek Czastka的视角，讲述了“一带一路”给中国和欧洲各大城市带来了很多便利，促进了国家之间的贸易和经济往来。
【答案】1. in Lodz, Poland 2. three years 3. 460 4. direct train services 5. close trade ties
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