参考范文
The charts show the information about qualification obtained by the graduates who worked in an advertising company in 1998 and 2008.
The proportion of graduates who had master degree majoring in science was the highest (29%), which remained constant in 2008. Similarly, the proportion of graduates who had master degree: art was similar in both years, with 11% and 13% respectively.
The percentage of graduates who had Phd: science was only approximately 10% in 1998, after which it increased dramatically to 30%. Likewise, there was also a sharp increase from 2% to 7% in the percentage of graduates who had Phd: Art.
By contrast, graduates with first degree: science accounted for 25%, decreasing sharply to 11% in 2008.The percentage of graduates with First degree: Art dropped considerably from 30% to 20%.
To sum up, graduates who worked in this company were more likely to have higher qualification in 2008 than that in 1998.
题目大意：电视直播犯罪庭审的利弊
分析：新题，可使用媒体和犯罪类题目的观点，难度不算大。
文章结构：
Introduction: 简单介绍一些背景和所持观点
Body1(正): 审判过程在电视上直播，更加透明;审判过程在电视直播，让试图犯法的人认识到犯罪的后果，起到了震慑的作用；
Body2(反): 审判过程在电视上直播，犯罪的过程可能被重述，青少年辨别是非能力不强，可能会模仿，影响他们的健康成长。
Body2(反): 审判过程在电视上直播，对受害者的再一次伤害。
Conclusion: 总的来说，审判过程的公开劣势比较大
参考范文
An increasing number of criminal trials can be watched on TV in some countries, because criminal events are more likely to attract the attention from the general public in the recent years. From my perspectives, I think there are more disadvantages than advantages.
The supporters indicate that the processes of criminal trials can be more transparent under the supervision of the general public. In this way, the behaviour like corruption can be avoided, since the results of the trials will be evaluated by the public. Also, the criminal trials are believed to have a deterrent effect on either prospective offenders and habitual offenders, because they realize it will have negative influences on their lives, including their careers.
However, the opponents regard thatcriminal trials shown on TV may causea rise in copycat crimes. Views of the criminal trials, especially teenagers who cannot tell right from wrong and without the proper guidance of their parents are more likely to imitate the behaviour of the offenders. For example, young views may perceive criminals as role models and mistakenly believe that they can adopt violent means to settle the conflicts with other people.
The exposure of the criminal trials may have negative influences on victims. The program on TV may be magnified and spread throughout the society by the public.As a consequence, this will have negative influence on the victims once again, and even lead to mood swing and overreaction. Not only does it affect their wellbeing, but it also erodes their confidence in the interpersonal relationship.
To summarize, although some advantages such as increase in transparency can be seen, it may have both negative effects on victims and people who are susceptible.
重要写作词组学习：
1. 模仿犯罪: copycat crimes
2. 错误的认为: in the mistaken belief that
3. 榜样: role models
4. 暴力手段:violent means
5. 震慑作用: deterrent effect
6. 潜在的犯罪: prospective offenders
7. 惯犯: habitual offenders
8. 解决和别人的矛盾：settle the conflicts with
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